Personal Space

The hawk was most definitely out tonight as I stood at the bow of the Staten Island ferry, coat collar popped and gloved hands thrust into pockets. This particular hawk bore a vicious set of teeth and wasn’t afraid to bite, which was fine by me. The colder weather combined with the icy wind that whipped off the bay afforded me some much-appreciated elbow room, a concept that was foreign to most New Yorkers.

Being all alone out here wasn’t a problem. I had been alone most of my adult life. Alone in a crowded room. Alone in committed relationships. The people closest to me, those tenacious few who loved a challenge, were kept at an equidistant arm’s length.

Alone was my appetite.

Alone was my mantra.

Alone was my destiny.

“Not too cold out tonight, is it?” a female voice said, almost sending me out of my skin. There, suddenly beside me, was a woman bundled against the chill air, lips curled slightly in sarcasm. Right next to me. Within the boundaries of my personal space.

“Not as cold as it could be,” I replied more out of reflex than want. What I wanted was a little privacy, to tend to my own affairs as other people on the ferry tended to theirs. It was part of the unspoken rule when you agreed to live in this city. You avoided eye contact and kept yourself to yourself.

I looked at this stealthy woman who took me totally unawares. A full foot shorter than me, pretty, petite, and of an ethnicity I could not readily identify, not that I was a whiz at determining a person’s country of origin on sight alone but her features suggested an exotic mélange that was almost otherworldly and anachronistic.

The immediate thing that came to mind wasn’t how stunningly attractive this woman was. My first thought was actually, Why are you talking to me? As a point of clarification, that was one of the things I admired most about myself, whether it was my face or the vibe I gave off, people generally never felt the need to walk up and talk to me. Unless of course, they were stark raving mad, or out to start a fight with a stranger they mistakenly assumed was harmless. She was clearly neither of those.

But the thought evaporated as suddenly as it appeared. She blurted out a simple statement of fact and I happened to be within earshot. Conversation over. Turn the page.

But it wasn’t over.

“Do you know who you are?” she asked in an accent that wasn’t exactly foreign but didn’t slot into any of the thirty-some-odd American English dialects, either.

“What?” I was taken aback by the suddenness of the question. “Of course I do. What kind of question is that?”

“I am not speaking of trivialities such as your name or occupation, your nationality or sexual preference, those are merely the tinsel people decorate themselves with to appear grander than they actually are. I want to know if you had to describe yourself to an absolute stranger you had no interest in impressing, what would you honestly say?”

“Most likely? Nothing.” I admitted. “I’ve never been fond of delivering self-summaries.”

Cavitation filled the long silence between us and I believed the conversation to be over.

I was mistaken.

“How old would you say I am?” the woman asked.

“I’ve never been good at guessing ages,” I replied, again out of pure reflex, something I’d have to learn to control better in the future.

“I am fairly certain that if I gave you one hundred guesses, you would not come close,” she said and for the briefest instant, her expression took on a sadness that could only have belonged to reminiscence. “You may not believe me but I am so old that there is no map in existence that can pinpoint my birthplace, a location lost within a faded memory that I have traveled the entire globe in search of, visiting places you probably do not even realize exist.”

“You’re probably right about that. Geography really isn’t my strong suit and I haven’t really traveled outside of the five boroughs.” I was instantly embarrassed by my lack of worldliness. “So, what brings you to New York?”

She remained quiet for a moment before answering. “I work for an organization, currently in a state of transition. It suffered drastic downsizing due to image problems and public opinion. My employer is in the midst of rebranding and taking on new staff to suit the company’s new direction. You can say that I am one of many headhunters.”

“Bravo. That was an artful dodge. You just said a mouthful and told me absolutely nothing about what your organization does to make a profit.”

“I can tell you, but only if you really want to know because that information comes at a price.”

“Which is?” I asked.

“Your undying loyalty.”

I chuckled. “Of course.”

“Of course, you agree to my terms, or of course, as in mockery?” she cocked an eyebrow my way. “We must be clear about this.”

“The latter, no offense.”

“I see,” she ran a hand through her hair to remove it from her face. I noticed she wasn’t wearing gloves and hadn’t actually appeared to be cold, the more I thought about it. “You asked me what brings me to New York. Would you believe me if I said it was you?”

I held up my hands in surrender. “All right, this is where I officially check out of this conversation.”

She took a step closer. “Your loneliness, your isolation is like a beacon to me. I am drawn to you. I know your kind. I have seen your future and you will most assuredly die alone. No mate, no children to carry on your legacy.”

“I hate to break it to you, lady, but I’m happily married with three kids who adore me.”

“Not true in the slightest. You have lived alone ever since your cat died of leukemia two years ago.”

“How—how could you know that?”

“The same way I know the first girl to break your heart was Shirley Hartsdale in the sixth grade when she began dating your best friend behind your back and made you the laughing-stock of the school. To this day you hold a distrust of people because of that incident, even friends and family.”

I hadn’t caught the last part of her sentence. My brain was flooded with thoughts of Shirley Hartsdale, someone I hadn’t thought of in years and even now, she left a bad taste in my mouth.

“The organization I work for has that sort of information available to them, not solely on you but everyone on the planet.”

Oh God, I started to panic. She’s a terrorist. Part of some ferry-riding Sleeper Cell that uses attractive women to pry information out of dumb single Americans. My photo was going to land in some Homeland Security dossier marked Terrorist Sympathizers. At that moment I just wanted this woman to be away from me. Far, far away.

“I am not a terrorist,” she smiled. “Nor am I a member of a cult. What I am is an adherent of a peacekeeping task force that seeks to restore balance to the world with the help of people like you, the overlooked, the forgotten, the unloved. More than an organization, the company that employs me is my family and is directly descended from the first family ever to touch foot on the Earth. It can become your family, as well.”

“What I can offer you is a love unparalleled,” the woman continued. She touched a finger to my temple and the wind died away. The air barely moved for several moments and I listened as she spoke. My world began spinning savagely. I winced and swallowed hard to prevent nausea from triumphing as her words poured images into my mind, saturated with so much sensory information and emotion that I thought I might have burst at the seams.

“You will want for nothing. I will bear you many children and you will have a family the size of a small nation. A family who will worship and adore you. All this and more if you will simply pledge yourself to me forever and always.”

She moved her finger away and the stillness of the air vanished, and the wind rose once more. I staggered a moment, my mind reeling with the imagery that pressed a palpable weight on me. When I regained my balance and sight, I stood there stunned and in comparative silence after being shown a world that only existed as the flimsiest of pipedreams. The reality finally hit that I was dealing with something way beyond my limited comprehension, something that threatened to swallow me whole if I wasn’t careful.

“And you will be free to follow your secret dreams. Let loose the novelist that resides in your heart and millions will read your words. You will be well received all around the world. Spend your days lecturing, even teaching and sculpting young minds, if that is your wish.”

She went on to say, “Or write and direct films that interest you, and your following will be massive. Fellini, Scorcese, Hitchcock, Kubrick, Tarantino, would not be able to hold a candle to you. Release a film each year, all guaranteed award winners, featuring stars of your choosing, all eager to play even a minor role.”

“And all this will happen because of you?”

Her tone became sharp as a knife. “No, because of your pledge to be with me and only me.”

“Like signing my soul over to you?” I knew the answer but had to ask anyway.

“What an archaic notion. All I need from you is your promise, sealed with a kiss. The question is: Do you want to live the life you have always dreamed of living or not? After years of struggling and going unnoticed by women and society at large, you learned to wear your isolation like a protective shell but this is not who you truly are, who you were meant to be. If anyone deserves a shot at the brass ring it most certainly is you, is it not?”

The weight of her stare made it difficult to maintain eye contact. “That’s tempting, it really is…but I can’t.”

“You would turn down everything?”

“I’m too old to believe I can have everything, and while I’m not the sharpest tool in the shed, I’m smart enough to know I won’t be happy. Maybe at first, on the surface, I will, but as time goes by I’ll know deep down that I didn’t earn any of those things.”

“Your struggle is a matter of record, my offer is simply payment overdue.”

“And you’re an unbelievably beautiful woman…”

“Thank you.”

“But I’m a man, cursed with all the frailties of the male ego.”

“I do not understand.”

“If I did this thing, if I let you alter the course of my destiny, I would need you to love me in order for it to matter.”

“I do love you,” the woman said and her bewitching eyes were filled with so much pure love that it made my heart ache to see.

“No, I need you to love me even if I had nothing of value to offer you. Don’t ask how, but I know all you’ve said so far is true, you’ve been careful not to lie, it’s an expertly constructed contract. But even with you offering the perfect life I wouldn’t be satisfied because you wouldn’t be with me because you loved me. You’d be with me because you needed something from me. Something I’m not clever enough to figure out at the moment.” I felt foolish because I truly couldn’t work out the angle. My soul wasn’t worth the paper it was printed on so I had to be in possession of some undiscovered value that was worth her organization’s while.

And suddenly I was aware of the nearness of the woman and no longer thought she was in my personal space but that I was in hers and I worried about what being within her sphere of influence might do to me. I was afraid that her essence, the power she projected would have tainted me, marked and cursed me forever.

“It appears I misjudged you,” the woman said, her expression as icy as the wind. “Your ego-driven need for unconditional love is just a mask. Your problem is not being too old to possess everything you have ever wanted, it is being too afraid.”

“What?” my voice cracked as I felt a sudden pang of terror.

“You are a dichotomy of fear. You are afraid of dying home alone, yet you fear leaving your house to meet a woman you can form a relationship with, you fear being friendless yet fear making friends, fear being childless yet fear the responsibility of having children, you fear being loved, fear being hated, you fear life and just about everything else and you are content to let it rot your soul as you waste away out of existence.”

The wind rose in unison with the pitch of her voice and I was hit with a blast so icy it made my eyes water. When I wiped the tears away and cleared my vision, the woman was gone.

I went inside the ferry because I felt the sudden and dire need to be around other people, to be close to them, to feel their warmth. I settled down in a seat between two strangers, neither of them pleased that I had invaded their personal space, but I was past the point of caring at the moment.

Looking down at the opposite end of the ferry, I saw the woman talking to a man, most likely another lonely bastard like me. I wanted to go over and warn him but he probably wouldn’t have believed me, and wasn’t it up to him to face his own temptations? Who’s to say that he wouldn’t have been within his rights to accept? And was I a fool for letting the opportunity to end my loneliness pass me by?

Then and there I made a promise to change my life, to put Shirley Hartsdale in perspective as I got on with living, and reconnect with old friends if it wasn’t too late, and I pledged to make new friends as I sought out the love I deserved and stopped waiting for it to come to me. If there was indeed some undiscovered value within me, I was determined to find it.

At least that was the lie I told myself as the ferry pulled into the harbor.

30 responses to “Personal Space

  1. “Your struggle is a matter of record, my offer is simply payment overdue.” – As much as I’d like to think I’d do the right thing, I’m not sure I would have been strong enough to turn down this offer! I got used to reading your stories every day and I felt your absence this week but this story was worth the wait! Simply brilliant as always, Rhyan! 🙂

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    • I think we’re pretty much in the same boat, Suranne. I’d like to think I’m made of high moral fiber but I’ve been known to be a sucker for a pretty face, especially one dangling the carrot of success.

      Your time, attention, and comment are definitely appreciated!

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  2. Boy, those final two paragraphs hit close to home… Fear is a scary thing (to make a moronic pun) and can certainly paralyze, just like that icy wind on the ferry. This was so well written. Great work as always! 🙂

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  3. Rhyan, still under the influence of your Halloween stories, I thought the woman was going to eat the poor guy. That’s the effect of your writing. It lingers… And there should be no bargains in love and success unless everyone involved has something to lose. Great story! Very much worth the wait. I’m glad you returned with a bang. 🙂

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    • Me and religion don’t exactly see eye to eye but the Bible sometimes raises interesting points, such as, what do you benefit if you gain the whole world but lose your own soul?

      There’s a scene in The Matrix where a program named The Architect is explaining to the protagonist that when the machines took over and began using humans as batteries, they constructed a utopic virtual world to lull us into submission, but we destroyed it. There’s something about the human condition that won’t allow us to accept perfection and we damn sure do not appreciate things given freely as much as things we’ve worked for.

      Not to say that I wouldn’t be sorely tempted by the offer at this stage of my life, even though this is loosely based on a real-life event.

      Cheers, as always, for the read and compliment, my dear.

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  4. I love this line: “Your ego-driven need for unconditional love is just a mask. Your problem is not being too old to possess everything you have ever wanted, it is being too afraid.” Totally relatable. Fear and loneliness are the worst. It’s tempting when that can all change in an instant just with an offer and hard to walk away from. Great story Rhyan!

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    • I don’t believe in Hell (aside from the nightmarish conditions we create for ourselves and others) but were it to exist and were I to land there, my personal Hell would be to have my wants, needs, and fears on display for everyone to see and possibly take advantage of.

      Time is the most valuable commodity we possess, Kirsten, and I appreciate you sparing some to read and comment! Thank you for the kind compliment!

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  5. I honestly didn’t think he was going to make it to the end of that ferry ride alive. Imagine being offered everything you’ve ever wanted. How many people would actually turn that down? People make wrong choices, stupid choices everyday. Like always you give me shit to think about, dude.

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    • I truth, he almost didn’t but I decided to let him live. Poor bastard deserved a fighting chance at some measure of happiness, didn’t he?

      As for dumb choices, I’ve made my fair share of them, so while I might not have been hooked by this particular bait, if presented a less suspicious way…who knows?

      People sign bad contracts every day.

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    • I am always humbled when someone takes the time to read and comment on something I’ve written.

      By the way, I really enjoyed your turkey story and laughed at your dad’s suggestion to “get a time machine go back three days and defrost the turkey.” I tried to leave a comment on your site but I couldn’t locate a comment field, is this intentional?

      In any event, thank you for the compliment and for offering to check out my books (if you’re looking for a suggestion, I’d go with “A Story Box Full of Regret” because it offers more bang for the buck)


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      • Sorry for the late reply, your comment somehow got lost in the shuffle. It was my pleasure offering you feedback and if you do wind up picking up one of my books, let me know what you thought of it and feel free to be completely honest, I’m incredibly thick-skinned.


    • And there’s the rub of instant gratification…no one ever considers the true cost, especially if payment is deferred. Were this situation real, I believe the number of people accepting the offer would rival and possibly even surpass the number who refuse it.

      I appreciate your feedback and the compliment, thank you!


      • You are quite welcome and I concur with your assessment of the possible outcome if this situation were real. I think the number of individuals who would accept the offer would indeed be quite staggering.

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  6. “Then and there I made a promise to change my life,” and “At least that was the lie I told myself” describes me to a T. I’m the queen of making sincere AF promises to myself that I never wind up keeping. I really enjoyed it although the woman scared the hell out of me!

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    • You’re not alone in that, Cuca. We all make those heartfelt (at the time) promises that somehow fall by the wayside in the cold light of day.

      And you should be scared of any stranger who walks up and offers you everything you’ve ever wanted. Just like you don’t take candy from the man in the van. The transaction works out just fine for them…not so good for you.

      Cheers for the compliment!

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  7. I especially liked when the perception of “personal space” shifted from the narrator to the woman as she exerted her control over the situation. Very well written!

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  8. “I am not a terrorist nor am I a member of a cult” is the biggest red flag in the history of red flags and the moment that I felt her exerting her influence on me, I would have dove off the boat and let Davey Jones Locker have its way with me! I’m not designed to fight off the supernatural or the unholy or whatever the hell she was!

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    • Everyone has their own unique way of dealing with the unusual and your option is one sure-fire way to make an escape, not the one I would choose, mind you, but you do you, Fernando! I’m raising a glass and cheersing your hopefully strong swimming ability and safe return to shore!

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