Micro-Fiction Corner: Every Detail But None

The police sketch artist spent thirty years producing composites so precise that witnesses sometimes recoiled when she turned the drawing around. She credited patience. Faces, she explained, emerged through accumulation: distance between the eyes, shape of the jaw, angle of the brow, one uncertain detail corrected by another.

A young detective found the pattern while digitizing old case files.

Several sketches from unrelated investigations showed the same person.

The crimes stretched across decades and shared no obvious connection. Witnesses had lived in different cities, belonged to different age groups, and described suspects of varying heights and builds. Yet beneath changes in hairstyle and apparent age, the face remained unmistakable. A narrow mouth. Deep-set eyes. A faint scar above the left eyebrow.

The detective brought the files to the retired artist expecting her to recognize a mistake. Instead she studied the drawings for nearly an hour.

She remembered every interview. She remembered witnesses struggling over noses, chins, hairlines, cheekbones. She remembered drawing each detail individually. What she could not remember was ever choosing the face those details became.

They arranged the sketches chronologically.

The figure aged.

Early drawings suggested someone in their twenties. Later ones showed middle age, then deepening lines around the mouth and eyes. The progression roughly matched the artist’s own career.

The detective expanded the search. More sketches surfaced in neighboring jurisdictions. Some had been drawn by other artists. A few came from descriptions given before she entered the profession. The same face appeared there too, younger again.

Then they found photographs.

A blurred face in the background of a crime-scene image. A reflection in a shop window. Someone standing among spectators behind police tape. Never central. Never clear enough for identification.

The retired artist has stopped discussing the investigation. She keeps one final composite locked in a drawer, assembled from every surviving description.

According to the detective, the face in that drawing is elderly now.

What bothers him most is the newest case. A witness described someone standing across the street during a burglary, watching the house with unusual concentration. The sketch artist assigned to the case produced the familiar face without ever seeing the older files.

This time, however, the scar above the left eyebrow is gone.

In its place is a thin pencil mark, exactly where someone might begin correcting a drawing.

©2013 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys


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6 responses to “Micro-Fiction Corner: Every Detail But None”

  1. kquintana Avatar

    Great advice! I know that there are moments when I’m told that there’s not enough tension, and I think you’ve spelled out exactly what I need to do to improve that. Thanks!

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      It happens to every one of us at one point or another. I’m glad you were able to pluck something useful from the post. Best of luck with your writing.

  2. Pistas Sophia Avatar
    Pistas Sophia

    Very nice post! Thanks!

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      Thank you, as always!

  3. kquintana Avatar

    I really enjoyed your post! You give great advice, especially on how to slow down the writing so that the reader can really feel the full impact of the scene.

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      Cheers for that! It’s much appreciated.

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