Micro-Fiction Corner: Slow Tartlet

The pastry shop advertised that everything was made slowly, and the baker meant this with unsettling precision. He offered her a plum tartlet beneath a glass dome and warned that the price remained reasonable provided she had nowhere urgent to be. The first bite took nearly an hour to finish. Flavor unfolded gradually: butter, almond, warm fruit, then a faint impression of rain against a window she had never seen.

She stayed.

Other customers chose quicker pastries and left within minutes. Those ordering the slow varieties remained at their tables, chewing with distant expressions while daylight moved across the floor. Some seemed younger whenever she glanced away. Others had accumulated clothing from decades that had not yet passed.

The tartlet grew stranger with each bite. She tasted the hands that had kneaded the dough, then the hands that taught those hands. Kitchens opened briefly behind her eyes: wartime kitchens, palace kitchens, basement bakeries, rooms where ovens were heated with wood because electricity had not reached the street. The pastry was not merely made from ingredients. It contained every moment required to produce it.

By the third bite, she noticed her own childhood kitchen among them.

That should have been impossible.

She tasted her mother rolling dough. She tasted herself stealing sugar from the counter at six years old. She tasted tomorrow afternoon, when according to the tartlet she would return to the shop wearing an apron.

She stopped chewing.

The baker explained that slow pastry worked by extending provenance forward as well as backward. Anyone who completed one became part of its production history. The recipe incorporated the eater wherever the timeline needed another pair of hands.

She tried to spit the bite out.

Nothing came.

Outside, the street had changed. Cars were gone. Gas lamps burned behind fogged glass, and the shop sign carried a family name she did not recognize. Behind the counter stood a much younger version of the baker, struggling with a bowl of dough.

He called toward the back room for help.

She knew, with the same certainty as remembering her own birthday, that he meant her.

The tartlet softened on her tongue as the shop folded her gently into the recipe, and somewhere far ahead in time, beneath a glass dome, another one began cooling.

©2013 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys


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5 responses to “Micro-Fiction Corner: Slow Tartlet”

  1. […] At this stage in the process, the importance of identifying your genre has to do with story mechanics. Certain elements step to the forefront and operate differently depending on genre, so you should be aware of the rules of the category–even if you decide to break them because of the maverick you are–as you’re arranging your idea into the proper story structure (see: Simple Anatomy of a Plot Outline). […]

  2. […] and minor characters alike. From Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys at rhyscorhys.com, I leveraged his “Simple Anatomy of a Plot Outline.” Both of these are excellent tools to use and keep in mind when you’re writing, or just […]

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    Carrie Gehl

    Dear Madd Fictional,
    We are an educational textbook publisher and our author would like to use the Plot Outline graphic organizer in his textbook. If this is possibly, please let me know to whom I may send a formal request.
    Thank you,
    Carrie Gehl
    Senior Rights and Permissions Specialist
    Kendall Hunt Publishing Company

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      Sure, be my guest.

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        Carrie Gehl

        Thank you!!

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