Micro-Fiction Corner: The Scrapes You Get Into

Every evening the Fuhad inspected his daughter’s knees. The ritual began with ordinary childhood injuries, but by autumn the scrapes had become too precise to dismiss.

One carried red brick dust identical to the wall behind the abandoned chapel. Another contained rust from a drainage grate on Orchard Row. A third held pollen from an apple variety that had disappeared when the old orchard was bulldozed years earlier.

Shelly never remembered falling. When he asked about the injuries, she examined them with polite curiosity and said she must have been busy.

He began mapping each scrape and discovered that they came from places the town had erased: demolished houses, paved-over streams, dead orchards, sealed wells. The marks were not abrasions. Each looked like a neat sample removed from her skin and replaced with something from the missing place.

Then the town began changing.

The demolished chapel returned between two houses overnight. An apple tree pushed through the supermarket parking lot, breaking asphalt as though decades had never passed. Water rose through manholes along the buried stream and flowed down Main Street in its original course. Residents argued about whether these things had always been there, and photographs adjusted themselves depending on who was looking.

Fuhad understood when he found a square of skin missing from the sole of his daughter’s foot. Beneath it was not flesh but darkness, deep and cold, with the faint sound of running water somewhere below.

Shelly’s body was becoming a map.

Each scrape restored whatever had been taken from the town, and each restoration removed something from her. She forgot multiplication. Then her favorite song. Then the name of the dog they had buried the previous spring.

He searched the notebook for a pattern and finally saw what the wounds were building toward. Every location formed a spiral around their house.

The final mark belonged in the center.

That evening he noticed the skin of his own palm had thinned into a pale square with a lifted corner. His daughter touched it gently and told him she had been wondering when the town would start needing him too.

Outside, something beneath the foundations began knocking upward.

©2013 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys


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15 responses to “Micro-Fiction Corner: The Scrapes You Get Into”

  1. Lani Avatar

    My grammar is okay, so I don’t laugh at the jokes. I believe Twain wasn’t too good at it either, so that made me feel better 🙂 But seriously, a wonderful and true for me post! Cheers!

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      My grammar ebbs and flows with the tides, along with my spelling (I was tragically born with typo fingers and plan to start a Kickstarter campaign to combat this deadly affliction). Truth be known, sometimes I chuckle at grammar jokes but most times I groan and roll my eyes. Glad your takeaway was positive.

      Regards.

      1. Lani Avatar

        Yeah, Kickstarter. Good idea.

        😛

  2. kquintana Avatar

    Wow! I think I fit every single one of these points. Especially number 6. There are so many voices in my head that at some moments I start to worry. 🙂

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      All you need to do is throw a party in your head, get ’em all liquored up and they’ll pass out soon enough. And you really only have to worry if the voices command you to do things other than write.

  3. Katie Cross Avatar

    That quote was definitely something that I needed to read today, as procrastination is exactly what I’m about right now. Oh, and number 5 is so true, and so annoying sometimes. And I do collect things!

    Oh, this was great! Thank you!

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      You’re absolutely welcome and I’m glad it helped.

  4. Kate is Avatar

    I was at the markets this morning and wrote a bit of dialogue on the side of my coffee cup.

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      When you’re a writer, the world is made of paper.

      1. Kate is Avatar

        That is brilliant! I will write that on my whiteboard ( a great piece of paper.)

        1. rhyscorhys Avatar

          Because of that little ego stroke, it’ll probably become the title of a future post.

          1. Kate is Avatar

            Haha, I am so glad about that.

  5. Santana McDonald Avatar

    One of the things I have noticed about myself, my writer friends and my favorite published authors is that they all seem to be a bit crazay. You can’t say I’m not right. I mean if you hear the voices of your characters in your head, mostly mine yell at me to get round to their stories, then I think you might be a little crazy to give the characters entity space in your head. LOL 😀

    1. rhyscorhys Avatar

      It’s not crazy, at all, especially if the voices don’t command you to break the law or kill. Until then, to quote from Tod Browning’s classic film, “Freaks”:

      “One of us, one of us, gooble gobble gooble gobble, we accept her, we accept her”

      Consider yourself at home. Consider yourself part of the family.

  6. Carol Weshenfelder Avatar

    Something I’ve noticed: geeks laugh at jokes that no one else gets, writers laugh at jokes that no one else wants to hear. LOL

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