Micro-Fiction Corner: I Don’t Wanna Be Free, I Wanna Be Pretty

The salon opened without any fanfare, tucked between a shuttered bookstore and a nail place that had been there for decades, and within a month it had a waitlist longer than anywhere else in town despite nobody being entirely sure what made the results so different. The stylist never advertised anything unusual, just cuts and color like anywhere else, but clients left looking not just improved but somehow correct in a way that was hard to describe to anyone who hadn’t experienced it, symmetry adjusted by fractions nobody could consciously identify, a warmth to the skin that lingered for weeks.

The cost, when clients finally noticed it, came due slowly enough that most of them mistook it for something else entirely. A returning customer might mention feeling a little flat lately, a little quiet inside, the kind of thing easily blamed on weather or work or the ordinary erosion of being an adult with responsibilities. Nobody connected it to the appointments at first, because the appointments felt like the good part of their week, the one hour where they left feeling more like themselves than they had in months, more like the versions of themselves they’d always meant to become.

What the stylist took, gently and without ever naming it, was something harder to miss once you knew to look, an ambition here, a stubborn opinion there, the specific restlessness that made a person want anything beyond the mirror. Clients grew calmer. They grew prettier. They stopped applying for the promotions they used to want, stopped arguing with partners over things that used to matter, smiled more easily at everyone including people who didn’t deserve it.

The waitlist kept growing anyway, because word of mouth is a powerful thing and the results were, undeniably, beautiful. The stylist never turned anyone away, never explained the trade to a single client, only smiled that same warm, professional smile and asked, every time, the same gentle question: and what are we hoping to let go of today?

©2013 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys


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