The Neghostiator Ch. 10: The Final Bargain

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Zhara opened her eyes to find herself in a vast, swirling void. So this was the abyss between worlds. She had given her immortal soul to spare those hostages, but perhaps her work was not yet finished.

As if conjured by her thoughts, the dark entity manifested before her drifting spirit. “Come to honor our bargain at last?” it rasped eagerly.

“Not just yet,” Zhara replied, a renewed confidence in her voice. “I’ve come to propose we…renegotiate.”

The entity bristled. “You dare trifle with me now, after our pact? Your soul is mine!”

“Yes, my soul you shall have,” Zhara soothed. “But I can make it far richer if you return me to my physical form.”

The entity scowled. “You’ve nothing left to offer, mortal.”

“But I do,” Zhara countered calmly. “By continuing my work, I will have countless more opportunities to nourish my soul – to grow in wisdom, courage, compassion. The depths of human experience are boundless.”

She floated closer to the roiling darkness. “Allow me some additional years, and I will experience love, loss, sacrifice. My soul will be infused with such richness it could sustain you for millennia untold.”

The entity pondered this carefully, tempted by the prospect. “Very well,” it finally acceded. “I shall restore your flesh. But our bargain will be fulfilled, in time.”

Zhara bowed her head graciously. “Our fates were always entwined. I will await your summons when my moment comes.”

With those words, Zhara felt herself torn from the void, hurtling back toward the earthly plane. She had gambled for more time, and won. Now she would live those years to their fullest, until the entity came to collect its due.


The paramedics huddled over Zhara Fuller’s lifeless form, their hands moving in a rapid, orchestrated dance of life-saving measures. The air was electric with tension, each second stretching into eternity as they worked to pull her back from the brink. Detective Jack Ross stood nearby, his hands clenched into fists, the weight of the world in his gaze as he watched them fight for Zhara’s return.

Dr. Emily Reid, her mind still reeling from the arcane complexities they had navigated, whispered incantations under her breath, not willing to leave anything to chance. She knew the balance of life and spirit better than anyone there, and while the paramedics toiled with the physical, she tended to the ethereal, hoping her efforts could bridge the gap between the two.

The SWAT commander, a tower of stoic resolve, stood shoulder to shoulder with Ross, his presence a silent bulwark against the chaos. His men had cleared the area, ensuring a safe perimeter for Zhara’s critical revival.

One paramedic, a seasoned veteran with scars and stories etched into his weathered face, placed the defibrillator paddles against Zhara’s chest. “Clear!” he shouted, and the room held its breath. Zhara’s body arched with the surge of electricity, a silent plea to the universe for a spark of life.

Ross’s heart hammered against his ribcage, each jolt a testament to their shared battles, to the supernatural wars they had waged side by side. “Come on, Zhara,” he muttered, a rare crack in his armor of professionalism showing through.

Dr. Reid’s chant grew more insistent, a melody of hope and desperation that wound its way around the paramedics’ efforts. The SWAT commander observed the scene, his years of service having taught him that sometimes the battle for life was the fiercest fight of all.

Again, the paramedic’s voice cut through the tension. “Clear!” The electric charge coursed through Zhara, and for a moment, everything seemed to stand still.

And then, with a gasp that seemed to pull the very air from the room into her lungs, Zhara’s eyes flew open. They were a whirlpool of knowledge, of experiences lived and yet to be lived, an echo of her negotiation in the void that few could comprehend.

Ross exhaled a breath he hadn’t realized he’d been holding, relief washing over him in an overwhelming wave. Dr. Reid stopped chanting, her eyes meeting Ross’s in silent acknowledgment of the thin line between their worlds that Zhara had just traversed.

The SWAT commander stepped forward, his voice a grounding force. “Welcome back, Detective Fuller. You had us worried there for a moment.”

Zhara’s gaze found Ross, and a weak but determined smile tugged at the corners of her mouth. “Not… done yet,” she managed, her voice a hoarse whisper.

As the paramedics began to stabilize her for transport, Ross leaned in close. “You’ve got a hell of a story to tell,” he said softly.

Zhara’s smile grew just a fraction. “And you’ll be the first to hear it, Jack. Promise.”

The team moved with renewed vigor, the once-stagnant air now vibrant with the palpable triumph of life over death, of one detective’s soul promised to an entity, yet spared to fight another day. The void had released Zhara Fuller, but it had not been left empty—it now held a promise, a future encounter that was as certain as the sunrise. But that was a concern for another day. For now, Zhara had been granted more time, and she intended to use it well.

Not. The. End.

3 responses to “The Neghostiator Ch. 10: The Final Bargain

  1. She really is a “Neghostiator.”

    Because she bought herself more time so smoothly and calmly.

    ‘”Allow me some additional years, and I will experience love, loss, sacrifice. My soul will be infused with such richness it could sustain you for millennia untold.”’

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