Tag: #microfiction

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: The Cheap Trick of Expensive Love

    Micro-Fiction Corner: The Cheap Trick of Expensive Love

    The first gift was a watch that cost more than the rent. It arrived after an argument about missed dinners, unanswered messages, and the strange way one person could make another feel abandoned while technically remaining in the relationship. The box was lined with velvet, the face set with tiny diamonds, and the card said, For all the time I owe you.

    That should have been funny. Instead, it worked.

    After that, every disappointment came beautifully wrapped. Forgotten birthdays became weekend trips. Cruel remarks became jewelry. Infidelity became a car with heated seats and a ribbon stretched across the hood. Each apology had weight, polish, a receipt, and the reassuring smell of something newly purchased.

    Eventually, the betrayed partner began measuring pain in retail value. A lie worth flowers barely counted. A serious betrayal required something custom-made. When the arguments grew worse, so did the quality of the gifts, until heartbreak acquired excellent craftsmanship.

    Friends called the relationship toxic. The answer was always the same: nobody understood how generous love could be.

    As the years passed, the apartment filled with objects too valuable to discard and too painful to enjoy. Watches slept in drawers. Designer clothes hung unworn. Crystal gathered dust beside framed photographs of vacations taken immediately after disasters.

    Then came the diagnosis.

    It was not fatal, but it was frightening enough to expose the machinery. There were appointments, sleepless nights, prescriptions, and long afternoons when companionship would have been useful.

    Instead, a courier arrived carrying a small black box. Inside was a necklace. No note.

    The patient held it for a long time before laughing.

    When the giver finally came home, the necklace was waiting on the kitchen table beside every expensive apology collected over twenty years.

    Nothing had been taken, nor had they been broken, or even been returned.

    The expensive lesson was that the cheap trick had never worked.

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: By Words Defined

    Micro-Fiction Corner: By Words Defined

    The demon arrived without smoke, sulfur, or ceremony. It just appeared in the corner of the room as a sentence.

    At first it was only three words long.

    You are tired.

    The reader laughed, because this was true. The sentence darkened.

    You are alone.

    Which was also true.

    The letters thickened against the wall, and the reader tried not to look at them, but new words appeared wherever the eyes went.

    Ignored.

    The demon gained shoulders.

    Unwanted.

    It grew hands.

    Failure.

    Its face began to form.

    The reader understood then. Every word gave it substance. Every accepted description made it more complete. So the reader tried better words.

    Kind.

    One of the demon’s fingers vanished.

    Necessary.

    Its jaw cracked.

    Loved.

    The thing screamed, although no sound entered the room.

    For a while, that seemed to be the answer. The reader spoke only generous words, careful words, words polished smooth by hope.

    The demon shrank. Then it smiled. On the wall appeared:

    Coward.

    The reader flinched.

    The demon’s spine returned.

    Liar.

    Its ribs unfolded.

    Cruel.

    Its eyes opened.

    The reader shouted that none of those words were true.

    The demon stepped closer, and that was when the reader understood the trap.

    Truth did not matter. Belief did.

    The demon became whatever language the reader accepted, whether whispered by enemies, remembered from childhood, or supplied by the reader alone.

    It leaned close enough for its breath to move the hair on the reader’s arms.

    One final word appeared between them.

    Demon.

    The reader stared at it for a long time, then smiled.

    “No.”

    The word vanished.

    So did the horns. Then the claws. Then the teeth. What remained was small, frightened, and almost human.

    The reader considered it carefully. “You’re a thought,” they said.

    The thing became smaller.

    “A habit.”

    Smaller still.

    “A word.”

    And at last, it disappeared.

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: Ya Gotta Die Before You Live

    Micro-Fiction Corner: Ya Gotta Die Before You Live

    Kenny read about it on a forum that specialized in things nobody should read about on forums: a loophole, allegedly, where a man could be declared legally dead, collect on a insurance policy he’d take out on himself under a shell company, wait the requisite period, resurface under a slightly different name, and live — as the forum kept putting it, in all caps, like volume was a substitute for accuracy — TAX FREE FOREVER.

    His uncle Ray had always said it. Ya gotta die before you live, kid. Ray meant it about failure, about heartbreak, about the used Camaro he’d sunk a summer into before it taught him something about patience. Kenny had never once considered that Ray meant it as advice about actual, medically certifiable death, and to be fair to Ray, he hadn’t.

    Kenny considered this a technicality.

    The plan required, first, a boat. Specifically, a boat that could be found empty and adrift with Kenny’s phone, wallet, and a single deeply insincere note inside it. It required, second, a period of quiet living somewhere with a beach and no extradition treaty, which Kenny located, optimistically, using the same forum. It required, third, a new identity, which he built out of a library card, a gym membership, and enormous confidence.

    It did not require, though Kenny discovered this too late, an actual understanding of maritime law, life insurance underwriting timelines, or the fact that his mother would report him missing within four hours and would, upon hearing the words “empty boat,” immediately and correctly assume the worst about her son’s judgment rather than his safety.

    The insurance company sent an investigator before they sent a check. The investigator found Kenny in nine days, tan, badly sunburned, going by “Darren,” working a beach bar for cash and telling anyone who’d listen that he was between things.

    At the hearing — because there was, in fact, a hearing, a whole undignified proceeding with a name plaque that said FRAUD, PARTIAL and a judge who looked at Kenny the way you’d look at a raccoon that had gotten into the attic and then, somehow, further into the attic — Kenny’s lawyer asked if he had anything to say for himself.

    Kenny thought about Ray, about the Camaro, about the version of the plan that had made so much sense at two in the morning with a laptop and a forum full of strangers who’d never once been asked to defend it in daylight.

    “My uncle always said you gotta die before you live,” Kenny told the court.

    The judge considered this.

    “Mr. Travares,” she said, “I don’t think this is what he meant.”

    “No,” Kenny agreed. “I’m getting that now.”

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: The Intelligent and the Stupid

    Micro-Fiction Corner: The Intelligent and the Stupid

    They were seven and nine when the school tested them, and after that, everyone had a shorthand. Del was the smart one. Josie was the other one — not stupid, exactly, nobody said that word in front of their mother, but the shape of it sat in every sentence that didn’t include her when the school called about the gifted program.

    For a while it didn’t cost anything. Del got the extra worksheets; Josie got left alone with more time to build things out of whatever was in the garage, which she preferred anyway, or told herself she preferred.

    It cost something at fifteen, when Del corrected her at dinner — gently, the way you’d correct a child, though they were the same distance from being children — and Josie stopped bringing things up at dinner at all, not out of hurt exactly, more like a room she’d quietly stopped entering because the last time she had, someone had rearranged the furniture without asking and called it help.

    It cost more at twenty-six, when their mother got sick, and everyone assumed Del would manage the doctors and the paperwork, and Del did, competently, exhaustedly, alone, because nobody thought to ask Josie, and Josie didn’t offer, because by then “helping” felt like walking into a test she’d already been told the results of.

    They didn’t stop loving each other. That was the strange, stubborn part. They just built two entirely separate systems for being loved — Del’s built on being needed, competent, correct; Josie’s built on being easy, undemanding, no trouble — and the systems worked, mostly, as long as nobody asked either of them to be something else.

    It was Josie, in the end, who fixed the roof.

    Not metaphorically — the actual roof, on the actual house, the summer their mother died and left it to both of them and Del was three states away being needed by someone else’s problem. Josie climbed up with a book she’d bought years ago and never mentioned to anyone, because mentioning things she’d taught herself had started to feel like an argument she didn’t want to have, and she fixed it, alone, and stood on the ladder afterward not knowing who to tell.

    She called Del anyway.

    “I fixed the roof,” she said, and there was a silence on the line that had thirty years in it — every worksheet, every dinner, every quiet withdrawal from every room — and then Del said, “I didn’t know you could do that,” and Josie said, “Neither did I,” which wasn’t quite true, and neither of them corrected it.

    That was as close as they got, that year, to starting over. It was enough. It had to be. They were fifty-one and forty-nine, and there wasn’t a version of them left that had time to be anything but careful with what remained.

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: A Tacit Deal with a Nephilim

    Micro-Fiction Corner: A Tacit Deal with a Nephilim

    MiMaw Gertrude always said the family had been lucky since before anyone could remember, and she said it the way you’d mention weather — as a fact, not a mystery, or something owed.

    The luck was specific. Wells that didn’t run dry when the neighbors’ did. A son who came home from every war her family sent one to, three wars running, unmarked. Crops that split the difference between drought years and flood years and came in fine regardless, like the land itself had made an exception.

    Gertrude died at ninety-one, in her sleep, on dry ground, in a year when everyone else’s basement flooded.

    It was her granddaughter, Gladys, going through the estate, who found the ledger — not a ledger exactly, older than that, goat-leather and stitched wrong by modern binding standards, written in a hand that got less careful further back, as though whoever kept it had once had all the time in the world and had learned, slowly, that they didn’t.

    The first entries were names Gladys didn’t know. Then names she did, going back generations, each with a single line beside it. Well did not fail. Son returned. House stood. No explanation of why. Just an account being kept, favor by favor, the way you’d track a debt you intended, eventually, to collect.

    The last entry, in Gertrude’s own careful hand, added only weeks before she died: Still here. Still owed.

    Gladys understood then what her grandmother had never said outright, what none of them had ever said outright, because saying it would have made it a bargain instead of a blessing. Somewhere back before the names, before the wells, someone in her line had been kept when the water came for everyone else — kept by something that wasn’t supposed to survive the flood at all, something the flood had been for, specifically, a debt God himself had tried to settle in one clean stroke and hadn’t quite finished collecting.

    The giants weren’t supposed to have descendants. That had been the point.

    But mercy, once given, doesn’t always ask permission to keep being given. It just keeps a ledger, and waits, patient as geology, for someone to notice the account was never closed.

    Gladys thought about the wells that never failed. The son who always came home. The dry ground under her grandmother’s house in a year of floods.

    She thought: someone will have to pay this eventually. Every ledger closes.

    Then she thought: not today, though.

    She turned the page, looking for her own name, and found the space beside it empty — waiting, she understood now, for her to decide what she’d let it say.

    Outside, it had started, very quietly, to rain.

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: The Unreasonable Fear of Repetition

    Micro-Fiction Corner: The Unreasonable Fear of Repetition

    Marla said “good morning” to the bread vendor for eleven years, and on the twelfth, she made herself say something else.

    “Cold one today,” she said instead, and the vendor blinked at her like she’d spoken a language he almost remembered, and handed over the loaf, and neither of them noticed the sidewalk hold its breath and let it go again.

    This was how you survived. You varied. You never said the same sentence twice in one week if you could help it. You took different streets home even when the different street was longer, colder, worse. You changed the order you buttoned your coat.

    The people who didn’t understand this were the ones who called it superstition, or nerves, or — the word she hated most — quirky. They said it gently, the way you’d talk about someone’s fear of birds. They never watched what happened to Dorwin.

    Dorwin liked routines. He said routines were comforting, said the world was chaotic enough without borrowing more of it, and every morning for six weeks he ran the same three miles, past the same maple, past the same cracked mailbox shaped like a barn.

    On the forty-third day, the street noticed him.

    It didn’t come as a monster. That was the thing nobody believed until they’d seen it — there was no shape to point to, no teeth. The air just got thick near the maple, thick like it was concentrating, like it had finally located the thread of him running through it for the forty-third time and started, gently, to pull. He didn’t scream. He didn’t have time to. He was just there and then he was a shape the street remembered better than it remembered him, and the next morning the maple was gone too, replaced by a maple-shaped absence that the neighborhood adjusted to within a week, the way you adjust to any story you tell yourself enough times that it stops sounding like a story.

    Marla told this to no one twice.

    She’d learned that part hardest of all — that even warnings were repetition, that the story of Dorwin was itself a thread, and if she told it the same way to the same person more than once, she risked teaching the air his name.

    So she varied that too. Some days she said he moved away. Some days she said she never knew a Dorwin at all.

    Only once, to a stranger on a train who’d never hear it again, did she tell it straight through — every detail, the maple, the mailbox, the way the air had learned to want him — because some things deserved, once, to be said exactly true.

    Then she got off at the next stop, and took the long way home, and did not look back at the tracks to see if anything had noticed her sitting in that same seat, telling that same story, twice now, if you counted the first time she’d told herself.

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: A Field Guide to Procrastinators

    Micro-Fiction Corner: A Field Guide to Procrastinators

    A note on method: Specimens were observed in their natural habitat — desks, kitchen tables, the fifteen minutes before a deadline stretched to feel like fifteen years. Field notes follow.


    The Reorganizer (Procrastinatus domesticus)

    Cannot begin the task until the desk is clean. Cannot clean the desk until the drawer is sorted. Cannot sort the drawer until every object in it has been considered, once, thoroughly, as though it might explain something. It will not. Continue anyway.

    The Researcher (Procrastinatus academicus)

    Requires “just one more source” before writing a single word. Has forty-one tabs open. Believes, sincerely, that the forty-second will be the one that makes starting unnecessary — that if it just reads enough, the work will have already been done by someone else, somewhere, and it can go back to bed.

    The Reply-Guy (Procrastinatus socialis)

    Will answer every message in every inbox before answering the one thing that actually needs answering. Prized by friends for availability. Mysterious to itself for the same reason.

    The Waiter (Procrastinatus temporis)

    Believes conditions will improve. Is waiting for better light, a clearer head, a Tuesday instead of a Monday. Has been waiting since March.


    Note: if you’ve read this far without doing the thing you’re avoiding, congratulations, you’re a specimen.

    I know because I catalogued you the way I catalogue myself — from a safe, Latin-flavored distance, like naming the thing makes it a different thing, something that happens to a type and not to a person. Not to me, specifically, at 11:40 p.m., writing entries about other people’s rooms instead of opening the file with my name on it.

    The truth is there’s a fifth entry I left out.

    The Guide-Writer (Procrastinatus scribens)

    Studies the species so thoroughly it forgets to stop being one. Finds real comfort in the taxonomy — in believing that if it can just describe the avoidance precisely enough, categorize it, give it a habitat and a call, it will have done something. It has not.

    It is, however, very good at writing field guides.

    Go do the thing.

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys

  • Micro-Fiction Corner: What We Tell Each Other

    Micro-Fiction Corner: What We Tell Each Other

    “—and the second time,” Marisol said, “he came back through the floor.”

    Nobody laughed, because nobody was supposed to.

    They did this every year. Four women, one fire, the kind of stories other people told to feel a manageable kind of scared. These women told them to remember they were still here.

    Dee went next, voice flat as a knife. “Mine never had a face. Just kept walking the same speed no matter how fast I ran. Like it knew I’d get tired eventually.” She turned a marshmallow over the flame, watched it blacken. “I did.”

    “But you’re here,” said Priya.

    “I’m here,” Dee agreed, like it surprised her too.

    Brenda hadn’t spoken yet. She was the newest, found them only eight months ago, still had the look — flinching at branches snapping, sleeping with a light on. The others had stopped flinching years ago. Mostly.

    “You don’t have to,” Priya told her.

    “I want to.” Brenda stared into the fire like it might tell her how to start. “Mine’s not finished.”

    The fire popped. Not one of them moved.

    “What do you mean, not finished?” Marisol asked.

    “I mean I never found out how it ends.” Brenda looked up, and for the first time all night, she wasn’t the youngest, or the newest — she was just tired, in the specific way all of them were tired. “It’s still out there. I checked, before I came here. It’s still out there.”

    Dee stopped turning her marshmallow.

    In the treeline, something that might have been wind moved through branches that didn’t sway with it.

    Nobody looked. They’d learned that part already — the not-looking. It never helped, but they’d learned it anyway.

    Priya reached over and put another log on the fire.

    “Then we wait,” she said. “No splitting up, drinking, drugs, or sex, this time.”

    ©2012 Rhyan Scorpio-Rhys